王依冉

要求：新的學(xué)期開始了，你打算如何計劃自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，請寫一篇短文來介紹一下。

New term is coming. Im going to make four resolutions for the new term.

First， I want to improve my English. I think English is one of the most important subjects. So Im going to practice English and keep on reading English every day.

Second， Im going to take up drawing as a hobby. So Im going to join an art club. I hope I can draw very well. Maybe I will be an artist in the future.

Third， I want to read more books this term. I think reading books can help me know more knowledge. So Im going to read for an hour every day.

My fourth resolution has to do with my physical health. I want to be healthier. So Im going to exercise every day， like running， swimming and playing volleyball. Im also going to eat more vegetables and less junk food.

These are the things Im going to do this term. I will try my best to achieve them.

簡評：文章先介紹的是自己的新學(xué)期打算，并且在敘述要采取的行動時，很有條理，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。句式多樣，句子結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句并用增強了文章的色彩。整篇文章準(zhǔn)確地運用了一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時。

（指導(dǎo)教師：馬艷紅 ）