吳金龍

【真題再現(xiàn)】

假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Daniel計(jì)劃今年暑假來(lái)江西度假，他向你了解江西城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的情況，以便選擇度假地點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的關(guān)鍵詞，給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，先介紹城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的相同點(diǎn)和不同點(diǎn)，然后說(shuō)說(shuō)你自己更喜歡哪種生活，并說(shuō)明理由。

城市生活：supermarket ，restaurant， apartment， car， bus， cinema， club， park.

農(nóng)村生活：vegetable， rice， motorbike， bicycle， visiting， neighbors.

Dear Daniel，

I am looking forward to meeting you！

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Best wishes！

Li Hua

【佳作欣賞】

Dear Daniel，

I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. I am looking forward to meeting you！

People's life is getting better and better both in the city and in the country. They pay more and more attention to keeping healthy. However， there are some similarities and differences between city life and country life.

In the city people like to buy things that they need in the supermarkets. They can eat at home or in the restaurants. They live in beautiful apartments. They often go to the cinemas， clubs or parks to relax themselves after work. On weekends they often go for a car driving or travel around by bus. Living in the city is really cool.

In the country， People are usually very busy. They grow vegetables and rice in the fields. They live in big houses， They ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around. They often visit their neighbors when they are free. They live a happy life.

I like living in the city better. Because I can go to the libraries， bookstores and museums， and I can learn a lot about the world.

Best wishes！

Li Hua

【作文點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本篇書(shū)信作文緊扣介紹城市生活和農(nóng)村生活的相同點(diǎn)和不同點(diǎn)這一主題，結(jié)合給出的關(guān)鍵詞，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，談了自己更喜歡哪種生活，并說(shuō)明了原因。文章結(jié)構(gòu)整齊，層次分明，語(yǔ)言流暢，表述清晰，運(yùn)用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)多種時(shí)態(tài)，且運(yùn)用了一些比較級(jí)的句型和情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，短語(yǔ)和一些復(fù)合句也運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，是一篇值得我們學(xué)習(xí)的書(shū)信佳作。

書(shū)信作文應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)建議：

1. 注意書(shū)信格式，內(nèi)容要緊扣主題。

2. 根據(jù)關(guān)鍵字搜集相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能偏離主題。

3. 列提綱，劃分段落，做到層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，條理清晰。

4. 將所要書(shū)寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整。

5. 仔細(xì)檢查，找出拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、時(shí)態(tài)、句型錯(cuò)誤，并改正。

6. 注意書(shū)寫(xiě)，認(rèn)真規(guī)范的抄寫(xiě)在試卷上。

（作者單位：山東省五蓮縣許孟鎮(zhèn)初級(jí)中學(xué)）