這是一篇關(guān)于理想的作文，學(xué)生可以從夢想是什么（what）、為什么有這樣的夢想（why）、怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想（how）等方面入手。學(xué)生在實(shí)際生活中可以體察、體認(rèn)不同職業(yè)的特點(diǎn)，樹立理想信念，形成正確的價(jià)值觀，為實(shí)現(xiàn)個(gè)人夢、中國夢而努力。

astronaut航天員

inventor發(fā)明家

postman郵遞員

scientist科學(xué)家

pilot飛行員

lawyer律師

artist藝術(shù)家

vet獸醫(yī)

doctor醫(yī)生

nurse護(hù)士

teacher教師

policeman警察

worker工人

writer作家

farmer農(nóng)民

care about

help sick people

make a lot of money

have a better life

make our country better

make people happy

invent（發(fā)明） useful things

keep people safe

help people

protect our country

help sick animals

catch bad guys

work at home

let people know the truth（真相）

make wonderful things

do scientific experiments（實(shí)驗(yàn)）

study hard

read widely（廣泛地）

keep healthy

go to college（大學(xué)）

have a good education（教育）

practice a lot

learn more about

learn from

keep patient（有耐心的）

do sports

介紹自己的夢想，以及有這樣的夢想的原因。

I want to be a/ an... like...

I will be/ do... because... I remember... So I want to... I also want to...

介紹為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想，自己會(huì)做些什么。

As the saying goes，“No pain， no gain.” To make my dream come true， I will...

A/ An... should...， so I will... What’s more， ...

總結(jié)，表明實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想的信心、決心。

Being a/ an... is not easy， but I will never give up. With my efforts， I believe my dream will come true.

?時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確：關(guān)于理想的描述與原因的闡述，建議使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；關(guān)于如何實(shí)現(xiàn)理想的闡述，可使用一般將來時(shí)。

?句意連貫：使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和過渡短語，使句意表達(dá)更連貫。

?語言優(yōu)美：恰當(dāng)使用形容詞、副詞或名言警句等，更生動(dòng)形象地表達(dá)情感、深化主題。

佳作發(fā)現(xiàn)地：江蘇省泰州市口岸小學(xué)五（6）班

指導(dǎo)老師：萬麗

Everyone has a dream. My dream is to be a scientist like Qian Xuesen， because science can make our country stronger and stronger.

To make my dream come true， I will study hard and never stop asking questions. I will do more scientific experiments， as the saying goes， “Experience is the mother of wisdom.” I believe that with my efforts， I will become a scientist in the future.

I have a big dream. I want to be a policeman because I want to help people and keep them safe.

A policeman needs to be strong to catch bad guys. To make my dream come true， I will exercise every day. I will study hard and learn about laws and important skills because a policeman should be able to solve problems.

I believe I will make my dream come true！

佳作發(fā)現(xiàn)地：江蘇省泰州市胡莊小學(xué)五（1）班

指導(dǎo)老師：史丹丹

I have a great dream. My dream is to be a great scientist like Qian Xuesen because I love science. Scientists make great contributions（貢獻(xiàn)） to our country. We have computers， mobile phones and many other things because of scientists. They make our lives better.

To make my dream come true， I will study hard and read more science books every day. I will also do more sports and keep healthy.

I hope my dream can come true because nothing is impossible to a willing heart.

Do you have a dream？ Of course！ Everyone has a dream and so do I.

I want to be a woman football player because I love playing football. I want to play and win for our country in the World Cup（世界杯） and the Olympic Games（奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)） someday.

To make my dream come true，I will play football every day. I will study hard and read more books about football. I will also learn from other players. I believe my dream can come true because “There is a will， there is a way.”