Last summer vacation was filled with so many funny moments. One of the highlights（亮點） was when I went fishing with some friends. After waiting anxiously（焦急地） for a bite， we started to feel disappointed when nothing happened. Suddenly， a curious kitten wandered over and started playing with our fishing lines（釣魚線）！ We couldn’t help but laugh. In the end， we didn’t catch a single fish， but we made friends with a “troublemaker（搗蛋鬼）”. 六（2）班 徐瑞

I had a happy summer holiday last year. During the longest holiday， I didn’t have to wake up early. I mostly stayed home by myself. I could do whatever I wanted， such as watching movies， listening to music， and reading interesting books. It was very hot outside. I could eat ice creams and watermelons in the cool room. By the way， I visited Nanjing with my parents. I enjoyed my summer holiday very much. 六（2）班 韓镕羽

小作者們用生動的語言描寫了自己的暑假。朱佳琪著重描寫自己在一個景點的游玩經(jīng)歷，張雨凝則側(cè)重自己在一個城市的所見所聞，徐瑞講述了自己釣魚時發(fā)生的趣事，韓镕羽則梳理了自己的暑假生活。暑假很長，大家都有不少豐富多彩的經(jīng)歷，描寫時既可以側(cè)重于一個難忘的“點”，也可以詳略得當?shù)孛枋鲆粋€“面”。