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某雜志社正在舉辦主題為“An amazing festival experience”的征文比賽。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，介紹你最難忘的一次節(jié)日體驗(yàn)。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

An amazing festival experience

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寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)引

（一）文體感知

該寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于節(jié)日經(jīng)歷的敘事類(lèi)文章。描寫(xiě)節(jié)日時(shí)，我們主要要寫(xiě)出節(jié)日的名稱(chēng)、節(jié)日的日期、節(jié)日的重要性以及節(jié)日活動(dòng)等。描寫(xiě)節(jié)日經(jīng)歷時(shí)，我們主要描寫(xiě)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和心情。該類(lèi)作文以敘述事件為主，要通過(guò)完整的故事情節(jié)和生動(dòng)形象的語(yǔ)言，使讀者在享受故事情節(jié)的同時(shí)有所感悟。寫(xiě)作要注意交代清楚六大要素，即時(shí)間（when）、地點(diǎn)（where）、人物（who）、事件的起因（cause）、經(jīng)過(guò)（process）和結(jié)果（effect）。

寫(xiě)作時(shí)，主要人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，主要時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

（二）文章結(jié)構(gòu)

（三）素材積累

高頻詞塊

traditional Chinese festivals 中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日

lunar calendar 農(nóng)歷

the first day of the first lunar month 正月初一

New Year＇s Eve 除夕

put up spring couplets 貼春聯(lián)

have a family reunion dinner 吃團(tuán)圓飯

lucky money 壓歲錢(qián)

eat dumplings 吃餃子

the 15th day of the first lunar month 正月十五

guess lantern riddles 猜燈謎

watch beautiful lanterns 觀花燈

the 15th day of the 8th lunar month 農(nóng)歷八月十五

eat mooncakes 吃月餅

admire the full moon 賞圓月

express strong yearnings 表達(dá)強(qiáng)烈的思念

the fifth day of the fifth lunar month 農(nóng)歷五月初五

eat zongzi 吃粽子

dragon boat race 賽龍舟

in memory of Qu Yuan 紀(jì)念屈原經(jīng)典句子

1. As a typical traditional festival， the Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of thefirst lunar month. 元宵節(jié)是一個(gè)典型的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，在農(nóng)歷正月十五。

2. On that day， we eat tangyuan which represents the reunion， enjoying lanterns andguessing lantern riddles. 在那一天，我們吃代表團(tuán)圓的湯圓，欣賞燈籠和猜燈謎。

3. Apart from those， there is Dragon Dance and other folk performances. 此外，還有舞龍和其他民間表演。

4. It is a day full of pleasure and laughter. 那是充滿(mǎn)快樂(lè)和歡聲笑語(yǔ)的一天。

5. This is a time for relaxation and celebration when people usually take this opportu?nity to get together with their family or have a good rest. 這是放松和慶祝的時(shí)間，人們通常會(huì)借此機(jī)會(huì)與家人團(tuán)聚或好好休息。

6. Besides， we tried some traditional foods， watched Dragon Dance and Lion Danceand participated in some other celebration activities， such as a temple fair. 此外，我們?cè)嚦粤艘恍﹤鹘y(tǒng)食物，看了舞龍、舞獅，并參加了一些其他的慶祝活動(dòng)，如廟會(huì)。

7. Before the festival， people are busy shopping and cleaning their houses. 在節(jié)日前，人們忙著購(gòu)物和打掃他們的房子。

8. On New Year＇s Eve， people will have a big dinner with their family， talking andlaughing. 在除夕，人們會(huì)和家人吃一頓豐盛的晚餐，一起說(shuō)說(shuō)笑笑。

9. With New Year drawing near， we are all excited to greet the most wonderfulmoment. 隨著新年的臨近，我們都非常興奮地去迎接這最美好的時(shí)刻。

10. People like to decorate their windows and doors using varieties of colorful papercuts， which may be in the shapes of animals or flowers. 人們喜歡用各種各樣的彩色的剪紙裝飾他們的窗戶(hù)和門(mén)，這些剪紙可以是動(dòng)物或者花的形狀。

11. As we watched TV， we made dumplings. 我們一邊看電視，一邊包餃子。

12. I will never forget this festival because so many fascinating moments have left adeep impression on me. 我不會(huì)忘記這個(gè)節(jié)日，因?yàn)樵S多精彩的時(shí)刻給我留下了深刻的印象。

13. On the first day of New Year， people will visit their relatives and friends andexpress their best wishes for the new year. 在新年的第一天，人們會(huì)走親訪友，表達(dá)他們對(duì)新年最美好的祝福。

14. I＇ll never forget the Spring Festival I spent in China because it was an enjoyableand exciting experience for me. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記在中國(guó)度過(guò)的春節(jié)，因?yàn)檫@對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是一次愉快和令人興奮的經(jīng)歷。

15. In my opinion， the festival is worth experiencing. 在我看來(lái)，這個(gè)節(jié)日是值得體驗(yàn)的。

【佳作欣賞】

An amazing festival experience

This was my first time spending the Lantern Festival with friends， which was anunforgettable experience for me. The Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar year. The custom of joyfully celebrating the Lantern Festival began asearly as the Western Han Dynasty， and still has a great influence on Chinese people today.

During the festival， there were lanterns of various shapes and sizes hanging through?out the streets， attracting countless visitors. Lantern shows were also organized， which cre?ated a festive atmosphere. What impressed me most was guessing riddles， as riddle guess?ing was interesting and full of wisdom. Many of the lanterns had riddles written on themand we couldn＇t wait to go to the owners to check our answers. At last， we received a littlegift， extremely excited.

We also ate tangyuan， which tasted sweet and delicious. Tangyuan in Chinese has asimilar pronunciation to tuanyuan and the round shape represents reunion， harmony andhappiness. Besides， we watched Dragon Dance.

With my friends， I spent an exciting and meaningful Lantern Festival. And I＇mlooking forward to the next festival.

即時(shí)訓(xùn)練

假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友John給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件。郵件提到他想利用自己的假期來(lái)中國(guó)體驗(yàn)一下中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 你推薦的節(jié)日；

2. 推薦的理由。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear John，

I＇m glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to ex?perience one of them.

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I am looking forward to your coming.

Yours，

Li Hua