I have a good friend. Her English name is Ann. She is my classmate.

She has a round face and two big eyes. She is beautiful.

She has a lot of hobbies. She likes dancing and riding.

We always study and play together.

I hope we will be good friends forever.

江蘇省張家港市云盤小學(xué)教育集團(tuán)云盤校區(qū)四（5）班 張馨文

指導(dǎo)老師 張 敏：

兩位小作者善于觀察人物的個(gè)性特征，通過好朋友愛笑、喜歡畫畫、喜歡跳舞和騎車、樂于分享等豐富的講述維度，讓人物更加鮮活。