Reading

同學(xué)們，你們知道美國(guó)和法國(guó)的學(xué)校午餐有什么區(qū)別嗎？讓我們通過下面的一篇小短文一探究竟吧。

What are school lunches like in different countries?See the two examples.

In the USA

It is common for students to order a school lunch.They eat a hamburger,spaghetti,or pizza as a main dish.They also have salad and milk with the main dish.Students have different choices for their lunch at school.

In France

In France,students have to eat a school lunch.They usually have bread and cheese with the main dish.They also have a lot of vegetables as a part of their lunch,and they can only drink water.In the end,there is fruit for dessert.

Do you feel hungry now?What do you like to have for lunch at school?

Wordlist

spaghetti 意大利面 main dish 主菜 salad 沙拉 choice 選擇

cheese 奶酪 a part of一部分 in the end 最后 dessert 餐后甜點(diǎn)

Notes

1.It is common for students to order a school lunch.“It is common for sb.to do sth.”意為“對(duì)……來(lái)說，做……是常見的”。這句話的意思是：“對(duì)學(xué)生們來(lái)說訂購(gòu)學(xué)校午餐是很常見的事。”

2.They usually have bread and cheese with the main dish.這句話的意思是：“他們通常吃面包和奶酪配主菜。”

Tasks

1.Fill in the blanks with the words in the passage.

2.What is your school lunch like?

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Writing

同學(xué)們，有規(guī)律的、健康的生活方式能讓我們健康、快樂地成長(zhǎng)！你能用英語(yǔ)描述一日三餐、運(yùn)動(dòng)等生活方式嗎？你能給他人提出健康生活的建議嗎？假設(shè)你是Andy，下面是你微信朋友圈里的好友Doraemon 發(fā)表的內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你在閱讀完后寫一段評(píng)論，并就健康飲食、運(yùn)動(dòng)鍛煉等方面給他提幾點(diǎn)建議。

My dear friends,I am a little sad these days.My best friend says I am too fat.He says I look like a duck when I run.I am 1.55 metres tall.And my weight is 58kg.Am I really too fat?How can I look better?

Can you help me,my dear friends?

原文呈現(xiàn)

Don’t worry,Doraemon.I think you’re really a little fat.You should control your weight.Fat can bring disease.

此處可以用連接詞將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為一個(gè)復(fù)合句，使文章更緊湊。句末可再加一個(gè)段落中心句來(lái)引領(lǐng)下文。

First,vegetables and fruits are important.You must eat more vegetables and fruits and less meat if you want to lose weight.

Second,breakfast is the most important meal for us.We should have some bread,milk and an egg for breakfast.But we should eat less at supper.

第二條建議與減肥關(guān)系不夠緊密。

At last,you can do some exercise every day.You can go running in the morning.If you keep doing them,you’ll be thinner and thinner.

建議用更豐富的詞匯和句式來(lái)表達(dá)對(duì)好友健康生活方式的建議。

I hope you can lose weight successfully and be healthier.

作為朋友，語(yǔ)氣可以更親切些。從所給語(yǔ)段中可以看出朋友是焦慮的，結(jié)尾可增加表示安慰和鼓勵(lì)的話語(yǔ)來(lái)體現(xiàn)友誼。

升格展示

Don’t worry,Doraemon.I think you’re really a little fat.You should control your weight because fat can bring disease.Here are several ways for you to lose weight and look better.

First of all,vegetables and fruits are important.You must eat more vegetables and fruits and less meat if you want to lose weight.

Second,sweets and drinks should be avoided.For example,we had better drink water instead of drinks like cola when we are thirsty.

At last,you can do some exercise every day.Why not go running in the morning? If you keep doing it,you’ll be thinner and thinner.What’s more,playing basketball can help you grow taller.

In a word,it’s better to change your lifestyle.I think you will keep fit if you do so.Remember that where there is a will,there is a way.

（江蘇省泰州市第二中學(xué)附屬初中陶鏡州）

綜合點(diǎn)評(píng)

本篇書面表達(dá)的題目創(chuàng)設(shè)了一個(gè)真實(shí)的情境，小作者以朋友的語(yǔ)氣，圍繞生活方式改變的話題給微信好友提出了中肯的建議。

升格語(yǔ)篇以總—分—總的結(jié)構(gòu)展開，布局合理，行文流暢，段落清晰，層次分明；每條建議圍繞一個(gè)中心句展開，再用具體例子支撐；文章語(yǔ)言豐富，表達(dá)建議的句式多樣；結(jié)尾處用英文諺語(yǔ)“有志者，事竟成”，鼓勵(lì)好友為實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)堅(jiān)持不懈地努力，情感真摯。

（江蘇省靖江外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校童玲）