My grandma has a hen.

The hen has seven little chicks.

Some are yellow and some are black.

They stay in a box.

The mother hen loves her seven babies.

I like these little chicks.

I hope they can grow up soon.

江蘇省錫山高級中學實驗學校第二小學三（14）班 陶鈺萱

指導老師 丁小林

孩子們構思巧妙，善于抓住小動物的主要特點，進而展開和小動物之間的故事描寫。小作者對動物的喜愛之情躍然紙上，語言天真，富有童趣。