Which animal do you like best？

My answer is the parrot.

I raise（飼養(yǎng)） a parrot named Polly.

He has a blue body with a grey head and a grey tail.

His feathers are soft and smooth.

He is so friendly that he loves to play with us.

江蘇省南京市瑯琊路小學四（2）班 朱泰然

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學生在描寫動物時能從多角度切入，介紹動物的外貌、行為、飲食、性格等，多樣化的句式使得文章生動有趣；描寫水果時，與季節(jié)巧妙結合，形象的比喻和真切的感受讓讀者感同身受。