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1 I could feel the excitement rising in me as I heldthe beautifully wrapped present in my hands. Ifumbled （笨手笨腳地做） with the string and then， un?able to contain my curiosity any longer， I opened it. Itwas a shiny， brand new laptop. I had scored straight Asfor my O level examination and this was my reward. Ihad always envied my friends who were exchanging news on chat rooms， instant messagingand e?mailing， all of which I knew nothing about. Now I was going to find out.

2 It started out simply enough. I was searching for some information online when Istumbled upon a social networking site. Soon I became glued to my new?found electronicfriend. I began to spend more and more time on the Internet. I had never imagined that theday would come when I would be transfixed by the glowing screen before me. Whenever Iwas not glued to these social networking sites， I would be going through fashion websites.

3 As time passed， I realized that I was hooked on the Internet. During weekends， whenI had more time on my hands， I could easily spend a few hours on my laptop. It came to apoint where I chose to lock myself in my room， refusing to go out and take part in familydiscussions. I preferred to stay connected to the people I befriended in cyberspace （網(wǎng)絡空間） although I had never met them. Sleep was replaced with scattered naps and my gradesat school also became worse.

4 It was about this time that my parents started voicing their disapproval. It became ob?vious to them that I was spending too much time on the Internet. I was asked to tone downmy usage of the Internet. Yet， however hard I tried， I was unable to pull myself away， un?able to end my chat sessions， and unable to concentrate on my lessons. I was desperate forjust another click， just another look at my e?mail or message board.

Reading Check

閱讀上面的短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。

注意：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。

Paragraph 1：

Then one day， my father took away my laptop.___________________________________

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Paragraph 2：

It was then that I decided to conquer my Internet addiction._____________________

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寫作導引

一、語篇研讀

（一）基本要素

（續(xù)表）

（二）主題探索

What is the text about？ And what does the author want to tell us through this? story？

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二、語言學習

（一）詞塊

Put the following expressions into Chinese.

（二）句式

Match the language features to the following sentence groups.（匹配語言特點和以下句子組）

A. 非謂語作狀語

B. 名詞性從句

C. 形容詞（短語）作狀語

D. 狀語從句

E. 定語從句

1.__________

I could feel the excitement rising in me as I held the beautifully wrapped present in my hands. （Para. 1）

I was searching for some information online when I stumbled upon a social? network?ing site. （Para. 2）

I had never imagined that the day would come when I would be transfixed by the glowing screen before me. （Para. 2）

Whenever I was not glued to these social networking sites， I would be going through fashion websites. （Para. 2）

As time passed， I realized that I was hooked on the Internet. （Para. 3）

During weekends， when I had more time on my hands， I could easily spend a few hours on my laptop. （Para. 3）

I preferred to stay connected to the people I befriended in cyberspace although I had never met them. （Para. 3）

Yet， however hard I tried， I was unable to pull myself away， unable to end my chat sessions， and unable to concentrate on my lessons. （Para. 4）

2.__________

I had always envied my friends who were exchanging news on chat rooms， instant messaging and e?mailing， all of which I knew nothing about. （Para. 1）

It came to a point where I chose to lock myself in my room， refusing to go out and take part in family discussions. （Para. 3）

3.__________

I had never imagined that the day would come when I would be transfixed by? the?glowing screen before me. （Para. 2）

As time passed， I realized that I was hooked on the Internet. （Para. 3）

It became obvious to them that I was spending too much time on the Internet. （Para. 4）

4.__________

I fumbled with the string and then， unable to contain my curiosity any longer， I opened it. （Para. 1）

5.__________

It came to a point where I chose to lock myself in my room， refusing to go out and take part in family discussions. （Para. 3）

（三）即學即用

1. 當他開始演奏時，觀眾們沉默了。（使用狀語從句）

_________________________________， the audience fell silent.

2. 雖然有點驚訝，但莫希什么也沒說，這在哈默德眼中意味著無聲的同意。（使用定語從句）

Though a little surprised， Mohi said nothing_______________________________________，

3. 哈默德提議莫希代表全班表演。（使用名詞性從句）

Hamed proposed _________________________________.

4. 她只是站在那里，無法相信剛剛發(fā)生的事情。（使用形容詞或形容詞短語作狀語）

She just stood there，____________________________________.

5. 在路上，哈默德傾訴了自己的想法，包括碰巧發(fā)現(xiàn)莫希的小提琴演奏得完美無缺。（使用非謂語作狀語）

On the way， Hamed poured his thoughts out，______________________________________.

三、續(xù)寫技能

1.“叫/喊”的詞匯表達

2.“叫/喊”的情景賞析

①“Dinnerisready！”heshouted from thekitchen“. 晚飯準備好了！”他在廚房里喊道。

②He screamed his head off at me for coming home late last night and not phoning.他沖我大喊大叫，因為我昨晚回家晚了而且沒有打電話說一聲。

③“Look！ What a mess you have made，”exclaimed the manager.“看！你把事情搞得一塌糊涂。”經(jīng)理大聲叫道。

④Something brushed past Bobs face and he let out a yell. 有什么東西擦過鮑勃的臉，他大叫了一聲。

四、續(xù)寫布局

根據(jù)續(xù)寫第一段段首句的內(nèi)容“有一天，爸爸拿走了我的筆記本電腦”，結合第二段段首句的內(nèi)容“就是在那時我決定擺脫網(wǎng)癮”，可推測續(xù)寫第一段的主要內(nèi)容是“我”為擺脫網(wǎng)癮而做出的努力以及父母對“我”的關愛。具體情節(jié)發(fā)展，可根據(jù)以下問題鏈推測：

1. What did I do to get back the laptop？

2. What did my parents do？

3. How did I feel？

4. What made me decide to conquer my Internet addiction？

根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段段首句的內(nèi)容“就是在那時我決定擺脫網(wǎng)癮”，可推測續(xù)寫第二段的主要內(nèi)容是“我”在父母的支持和幫助下進行網(wǎng)癮戒斷，并從中體會到父母的愛和一家人在一起的幸福。具體情節(jié)發(fā)展，可根據(jù)以下問題鏈推測：

1. What did I do to get parentssupport and help？

2. Was it easy to conquer Internet addiction？

3. What happened when I started to conquer Internet addiction？

4. Did I conquer Internet addiction finally？