四川 蔣建平

?情境呈現(xiàn)

假如你上周末第一次去廈門旅行，請(qǐng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文介紹此次旅行的見(jiàn)聞，內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹景點(diǎn)；

2.談?wù)勀愕母惺堋Ｗ⒁猓?/p>

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

?寫作指導(dǎo)

Step 1 審題

本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇游記。游記是對(duì)某一景點(diǎn)進(jìn)行介紹和描述的文體，即對(duì)旅游景點(diǎn)和所見(jiàn)所聞的描寫。同時(shí)，大概描述一下旅游的路線和順序，使文章線索清晰，給讀者以景點(diǎn)的大致輪廓。介紹完見(jiàn)聞后，對(duì)此次旅行進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)明扼要的總結(jié)。

Step 2 謀篇

Step 3 語(yǔ)庫(kù)

一、短語(yǔ)

第一次for the first time

留下深刻的印象leave a deep impression

位于be located/situated at/in/on

各種美味的小吃various delicious snacks

被……包圍be surrounded by

被……吸引be attracted by

成千上萬(wàn)的游客thousands of tourists

乘船by sea/ship

二、句子

Step 4 短文

【佳作賞析】

I traveled to Xiamen last weekend for the first time,which left a deep impression on me.

Xiamen is located in the southeast of Fujian Province,and Gulangyu Island is one of the most famous places in Xiamen.Thousands of tourists go to Gulangyu Island every day.There is a community called Zengcuoan,where you can taste various delicious snacks.Xia?men University is a beautiful place which you must visit.After visiting it,you can find it is a wonderful thing to go to university.Xiamen is surrounded by the sea.You can go to pick up shells and swim in the sea.

In short,what a fascinating city Xiamen is!

?即時(shí)訓(xùn)練

假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Tom 寫郵件來(lái)詢問(wèn)你一次難忘的旅游經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回一封郵件，要點(diǎn)包括：

1.旅游過(guò)程；

2.你的感受。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

I'm glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last sum?mer holiday with you.

I'm looking forward to going there with you next time.

Yours,

Li Hua