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◎文體概述

本話題主要涉及旅游、詢問與預訂、交通方式、指路與問路、安全條例與警告等。針對本話題，高考命題人員可能會從以下幾種角度來命題：

1. 旅游計劃的擬訂、旅游準備及注意事項;

2. 酒店、景點等的預訂及費用;

3. 國外旅游注意事項;

4. 太空旅游、生態(tài)旅游;

5. 護照、簽證的申辦及其費用;

6. 度假方式的變化及其原因;

7. 描述旅游經歷;

8. 問路與指路;

9. 私家車激增的利與弊;

10. 交通方式的變化及其對人們生活的影響;

11. 交通安全。

◎寫作模板

It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel， you will see

_______. Besides， you can _______ . Finally， you can _______ .

People travel for various reasons. Some travel for pleasure. Some ________. And others .

Traveling makes an open man. You may ________.

模板范文

It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel， you will see beautiful scenery， meet and make friends with different people and understand the customs of the local people.

People travel for various reasons. Some travel for pleasure. Some travel to enjoy more delicious foods. And others travel for a broader horizon.

Traveling makes an open man. You may have read or heard about something， but you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it by yourself. If you want to enrich your life， how I hope you can travel with me.

◎經典句型

1. I think the train is much safer than the airplane. 我覺得火車比飛機安全多了。

2. It is the first time for me to come to Beijing. 這是我第一次來北京。

3. With a long history， Beijing is rich in tourist attractions. 北京歷史悠久，名勝古跡眾多。

4. The scenery is charming！ 這里景色迷人！

5. Great changes have taken place in the ways that people spend their holidays over the period from the year 1998 to 2018. 在1998年至

2018年間，人們的度假方式已經發(fā)生了巨大的變化。

6. The best time to visit Hainan is between November and March. 來海南游玩的最佳時間是在11月至3月。

7. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. 他們說大量的游

客涌到動物園會導致交通阻塞。

8. However， others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. 然而，其他人喜歡出去旅游，是因為這既可以增長知識，又可以開闊視野。

9. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest， such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. 四川省旅游資源豐富，有許多世界著名的風景名勝，如九寨溝、都江堰水利工程。

10. Besides， the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. 此外，這里的好天氣以及便利的交通會讓你的旅行更加愉悅。

11. At 7：00 on the morning of October 1， well visit the Great Wall. 10月1號上午7點我們將游覽長城。

12. What's more， riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. 更為重要的是，騎自行車對我們來說是一種很好的鍛煉，同時也對我們的健康有利。

13. As is known to all， with the improvement of our living standards， cars have become a popular means of transport， bringing great convenience to our life. 眾所周知，隨著我們生活水平的提高，小汽車變成一種受歡迎的交通工具，給我們的生活帶來很大的便利。

◎典題鏈接

你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內容包括：

1. 你建議的線路;

2. 你的理由;

3. 你的祝愿。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim，

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Yours，

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1. 審題立意

該篇書面表達采用的是應用文的考查形式，寫作任務要求考生根據(jù)提示寫一封回信。從測試內容上來看，回信的主題與旅游有關，所供選路線均為中國著名景點，一方面提醒考生要走進大自然、享受自然之美，另一方面也教育學生熱愛祖國。

從提示上來看，題干所提供的兩條路線沒有給出具體的內容，試題的寫作要點也沒有給出具體的細節(jié)，而只是寬泛的提示，所以具有很大的開放性，這要求考生結合自己對長江或泰山的了解羅列出有用的寫作素材來合理組織寫作。因此，該寫作任務提醒考生寫作的靈感往往來源于生活，所以我們平時應多關注生活，在生活中不斷積累寫作素材，這樣才不至于在寫作中無話可說。因試題已經給出了書信的格式，所以考生不必考慮和擔心書信格式的正確與否，可以直接根據(jù)自己的寫作安排展開寫作。

2. 寫作要點

（1）信件開頭簡短的寒暄和導入;

（2）推薦路線：長江之行或泰山之旅;

（3）說明為對方推薦該路線的理由;

（4）祝對方旅游愉快。

3. 注意事項

（1）路線選擇應以自己對該路線有較好的了解為基礎;

（2）所給出的理由應具有說服力。

【佳作賞析1】

Dear Jim，

Hearing that youll visit China， I advise you to have a trip to Mount Tai. ①

Mount Tai， which is crowned the most famous of China's five great mountains②， attracts millions of tourists every year. It has a long history and has witnessed the changes of Chinese old civilization. Although climbing it is not that easy， you can build up your body. ③ In the meanwhile④， the beautiful spots are sure to attract you all the way.

Therefore， choosing to travel to Mount Tai is a good choice.⑤ I hope that you can have a good time in China.

Yours，

Li Hua

亮點分析：本篇習作語言樸實自然，符合書信的寫作特點。文章語言十分簡潔，但含有豐富的內容。推薦對方登泰山的原因介紹為文章寫作重點，筆墨頗多，讓讀者對泰山有深入的了解，很好地達到了寫作的目的。文中crown、 witness等高級詞匯的使用體現(xiàn)了考生豐富的詞匯知識。in the meanwhile、 therefore等過渡詞的使用更是讓文章渾然一體，結構緊湊?？傊?，該篇習作很好地完成了寫作任務，理應為一篇高考滿分作文。

①文章開頭不拖泥帶水，直入主題。其中Hearing that youll visit China為現(xiàn)在分詞短語，在句中作狀語。

②這是一個非限制性定語從句，其中使用了crown這一高級詞匯，說明泰山的名氣，增加了說服力。

③這是一個由although引導的讓步狀語從句，該句說明了建議對方登泰山的理由。

④此處In the meanwhile用作過渡詞，該過渡詞使用貼切，并很自然地引出了登泰山的另一個理由。

⑤該句以therefore對上文作出總結，該句中的choosing to travel to Mount Tai為動名詞作主語。

【佳作賞析2】

Dear Jim，

Im glad to hear that youre paying a visit to China. As for your travel route， Id like to recommend that you? have a trip along the Changjiang River.①

As we all know， the Changjiang River is a symbol of China and it is the longest river in China， representing the long history of China.② Therefore， not only can you appreciate the beautiful scenery but you can also have a good knowledge of Chinese culture in the trip.③ Besides， because the river runs through ten provinces and cities， you can taste various Chinese delicious foods.④

I hope that you can have a wonderful time in China.⑤

Yours，

Li Hua

亮點分析：本篇習作考生向對方推薦長江之行，文章所給理由充分，即說明了可以欣賞美景，了解中國文化，還可以品嘗中華美食。文章內容豐富，行文流暢，結構明晰。全文多處使用復雜句，分詞作狀語、主從復合句、虛擬語氣等，這都體現(xiàn)了考生較全面的語法知識，而represent、have a good knowledge of、various等高級詞匯的使用也體現(xiàn)出考生扎實的語言功底。

①在recommend后是一個賓語從句，該從句用（should）do這一虛擬語氣結構。

②該句中的as we all know引導非限制性定語從句，representing為現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。

③這是一個not only...but also...結構，not

only放在主語前，句子使用了部分倒裝結構。

④此處because引導一個原因狀語從句，該句說出了進行長江之行的又一理由。

⑤文章最后用簡潔的語言表達了考生的祝愿。

參考范文

Dear Jim，

From your last letter， I've known that you'll visit China. I'd prefer to recommend that you climb Mount Tai， which is located in Shandong Province.

Mount Tai has an altitude of 1，545 meters. There are more than 6，000 steps to climb if you want to get to the top of it. Consequently， climbing Mount Tai is really a challenge. How'ever， you can test your perseverance by climbing it. At the same time， the beautiful scenery will surely leave you a deep impression.

I hope you can have a great time in China.

Yours，

Li Hua

◎小試牛刀

假定你是李華，計劃組織一次郊游，請給你的英國朋友Chris寫封郵件邀請他參加。內容包括：

1. 參加者;

2. 時間、地點;

3. 活動：登山、野餐等。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Chris，

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Yours，

Li Hua