安徽 吳安運(yùn)

★話題概述

衛(wèi)生與健康是學(xué)生在日常生活中最為熟悉的話題之一。對(duì)于這類話題，寫作時(shí)無(wú)論是觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)，還是事理的分析，都能有話可說(shuō)。但也要注意以下兩點(diǎn)：

1.分析評(píng)論、例證一定要清晰，觀點(diǎn)鮮明，不要拖泥帶水。

2.論證手段、方法評(píng)述與英語(yǔ)說(shuō)明文中的一些寫作手法相同，常用舉例法、因果法、比較法等等，但不要寫成以介紹健康知識(shí)為主的說(shuō)明文。

從議論的角度看，衛(wèi)生與健康方面的話題大致可以分為以下兩種情況：

1.分析篇

Health and diet.

Should we get up early?

Smoking and health.

Ban smoking in public places.

Is doing sports helpful for health?

以上話題在寫作時(shí)，作者要判斷和分析所討論的事物或觀點(diǎn)的性質(zhì)，要闡述其重要性、正確性、必要性或荒謬性、危害性等。

2.理由篇

Why do we do sports?

It's necessary for you to exercise.

We must be healthy.

Health is money.

Have a healthy body，you will have all.

以上話題在寫作時(shí)，作者應(yīng)對(duì)這些話題進(jìn)行緣由闡述，并做到有理有據(jù)，以理服人。

★寫作模板

模板1：

第一段：引言，綜述現(xiàn)象，引出話題。例如：However，bad eating habits...All these bad habits will...

第二段：議論主體，分析原因或提出建議。例如：To keep fit，we should...We'd better have...

第三段：結(jié)論，闡明觀點(diǎn)，總結(jié)論證。例如：In my opinion，we should...

模板2：

Firstly，__________.We should __________.As a proverb says，__________________.So fruit is_______________.Meanwhile，sweets should be___________________________________________.

★高頻詞語(yǔ)

keep fit/stay healthy保持健康，be in good health身體健康，live healthily健康地生活，a healthy lifestyle一種健康的生活方式，smoking吸煙，do morning exercises做早操，get ill生病，be weak虛弱，early rise早起，get old衰老，exercise a lot多鍛煉，be good for health對(duì)身體有好處，be harmful to...對(duì)……有害，a good habit of sleeping好的睡眠習(xí)慣，eat and drink too much暴飲暴食

★經(jīng)典句型

1.We often say health is happiness.我們經(jīng)常說(shuō)健康就是幸福。

2.If you play sports more，you must feel like eat－ing well，then you can be healthier!多運(yùn)動(dòng)，胃口好，然后身體會(huì)更棒!

3.To keep fit，there are at least three things we can do every day.為了保持健康，我們每天至少可以做三件事。

4.By taking exercise，we can always stay healthy.通過(guò)體育鍛煉，我們能夠始終保持健康。

5.To keep healthy，it is important for everyone to follow a balanced diet.為了保持健康，平衡飲食對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。

6.It is necessary to know the ways to stay healthy.知道如何保持健康是很有必要的。

7.Exercising is helpful to your body.鍛煉對(duì)你的身體有好處。

8.As a matter of fact，it is health that counts. 事實(shí)上，健康才是最重要的。

9.Smoking is dangerous，and leads to many diseases like cancer and heart disease.吸煙有害健康，并且會(huì)引發(fā)許多疾病，如癌癥和心臟病。

10.Smoking can cost you much money every year.吸煙每年都會(huì)花掉你很多錢。

11.Playing computer games not only takes much time but also does harm to health.玩電腦游戲既浪費(fèi)大量時(shí)間又有害健康。

12.If you are a smoker，you should try to give up smoking little by little.如果你嗜好抽煙，應(yīng)該慢慢戒掉它。

13.It is good to run every day.每天堅(jiān)持跑步是有好處的。

14.Please wash your hands before you eat.飯前請(qǐng)洗手。

15.There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，近視在我國(guó)的年輕人中是一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題。

★題例解讀

健康是幸福生活的基石。尤其是青少年的健康，更加受到家庭、學(xué)校乃至全社會(huì)的關(guān)注。假如你是你們學(xué)校的健康達(dá)人，應(yīng)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部的邀請(qǐng)，你將給全體成員做一個(gè)“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”的報(bào)告。請(qǐng)參考下面的提示，完成報(bào)告。

具體要求：

1.80詞左右。開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2.所給提示僅供參考，需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

提示詞語(yǔ)：a balanced diet，enough exercise，be happy

Dear friends，

It's a great honor to speak here.My topic is“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”.

Thanks for listening.

【題目解讀】

1.審題立意

此作文屬于應(yīng)用文范疇的報(bào)告。該報(bào)告的寫作目的是介紹健康的重要性，以及保持健康的秘訣。它是半開(kāi)放性的文章，只要我們把平時(shí)發(fā)生在自己身上的生活經(jīng)歷加以提煉概括，精心組織語(yǔ)言，巧妙運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞句就能完成一篇理想的佳作。

2.信息要點(diǎn)

健康的重要性、保持健康的秘訣和恰當(dāng)?shù)目偨Y(jié)。

3.謀篇布局

第一部分：引出話題——健康的重要性。

第二部分：完善話題——如何保持健康。

第三部分：表達(dá)愿望——健康生活。

4.注意事項(xiàng)

①本文要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。

②要有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞與過(guò)渡詞，使文章富有條理性和邏輯性。

③語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格要符合報(bào)告的要求。

【佳作賞析】

Dear friends，

It's a great honor to speak here.My topic is“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”.① As a wise man puts it，a happy life is based on good health.As a result，health ②is of great importance to us.Every one of us has to show concern about good health.Then what can we do to keep fit?

In my opinion，a balanced diet is to us what water is to fish.③Those who hardly eat vegetables and fruits should make a decision to overcome the bad habits.④When eating healthy food，you will be full of energy.Besides，we should do enough exercise，like walking and jogging.Believe it or not，if you keep on exercising regularly，⑤it won't be long before you succeed in keeping healthy.Last but not least，we ought to keep a good mood every day.

I do hope that you can meet with my advice，and live a happy and healthy life from now on.

Thanks for listening.

亮點(diǎn)分析：報(bào)告中首先強(qiáng)調(diào)了健康的重要意義，然后從三個(gè)方面闡述如何保持健康，完全覆蓋了寫作要點(diǎn)。語(yǔ)言地道，符合英美習(xí)慣。

高級(jí)詞匯和句型的運(yùn)用，凸顯了作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。過(guò)渡詞的巧妙使用，使文章銜接緊湊，渾然一體。

①As a wise man puts it這個(gè)句型運(yùn)用得合理、恰當(dāng)，具有說(shuō)服力。

②be of great importance是文章的亮點(diǎn)，比be very important更能得到印象分。

③who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句，顯示出作者對(duì)高級(jí)句型的掌控能力。

④現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)，有時(shí)為了強(qiáng)調(diào)可在之前加連詞，以顯示作者深厚的語(yǔ)法功底。

⑤it won't be long before...該句型的運(yùn)用，增加了文章的得分點(diǎn)，同時(shí)succeed in doing...（成功做……），強(qiáng)調(diào)鍛煉帶來(lái)的實(shí)際效果，非常鮮明與傳神。

【參考范文】Dear friends，

It's a great honor to speak here.My topic is“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”.

I'm so glad you care about health like me.Good health may bring us a long happy life，good work and even better grades.Keeping healthy is really important.

As for the secrets of keeping healthy，I think different people have different answers.In my opinion，having a healthy lifestyle is the most important.First，it's helpful to have enough sleep and a balanced diet.Breakfast is the top meal of the day，so we can't miss it.At the same time，find a physical activity you enjoy and keep on doing it.I have kept playing ping-pong for seven years and I really enjoy doing that.Also，everyone should develop a sense of humour and always be a happy person.

I hope you look after your health from now on and live a happy and healthy life forever.

Thanks for listening.

★實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

中學(xué)生的行為習(xí)慣直接影響著他們的健康成長(zhǎng)。下周的英語(yǔ)課上，老師打算讓同學(xué)們介紹個(gè)人的行為習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，準(zhǔn)備一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿。

要求：

1.短文須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻譯），并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.詞數(shù)80左右（開(kāi)頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Good morning，everyone!

I'm glad to be here to talk about my habits.

That's all.Thanks for listening!