遼寧省營口開發(fā)區(qū)熊岳高級學(xué)校 曹維

文體感知

求助信是指寫信人就某一個問題向收信人尋求幫助，希望收信人就寫信人提出的問題提供幫助或給出針對性的解決方法。其結(jié)構(gòu)為：

求助信

1.點(diǎn)明寫信目的，清楚表明要尋求怎樣的幫助；

2.具體講述自己的困難，再提出請求；

3.誠懇地提出希望，表達(dá)需要得到幫助的迫切心情并表示感謝。

語言風(fēng)暴

【常用句式】

1．開頭常用語

①M(fèi)y name is...I'm writing to you for some help.

我的名字是……我寫信向你求助。

②I'm writing a letter to you to get some help about...

我給你寫信是想得到……方面的一些幫助。

③I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.I have some difficulty in doing...，which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.

我寫信向你求助。我在做……方面有困難，這很困擾我。所以我別無選擇只能向你求助。

2．主體部分常用語

①I have met much difficulty in...

我在……方面遇到了很多困難。

②In the meanwhile/At the same time，I beg you to...so that...

同時，我請求你……這樣……

③I'm eager to get your timely help./I'm eager for your timely help.

我渴望得到你及時的幫助。

④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties， I have to turn to you for help.

面對如此多的困難，我不得不向你求助。

3．結(jié)尾常用語

①I will be very grateful if you could help me.../I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and...

如果你能幫助我……我會非常感激。

②We do hope you can give us some advice.

我們非常希望你能給我們一些建議。

③Looking forward to your reply.And I'd be really thankful.

期待你的回復(fù)。我非常感激。

任務(wù)呈現(xiàn)

（2016·全國乙卷）假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Ms Jenkins寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【滿分作文】

Dear Ms Jenkins，

I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.(寫信目的)

To get some practical experience，I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company.I have already finished my application and resume.As this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume，I don't know if there is something to pay attention to.（講述困難） So， I'm writing to you the letter，hoping you can give me some help.I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.(提出請求)

Looking forward to your reply.(表達(dá)期望)Yours，Li Hua

黃金模板

Dear Sir/Madam，

I'm...(自我介紹)I'm writing to get some help about...(說明寫信目的)

I have met many difficulties in...(遇到的困難)First， ...Besides，...What's more，...(分層次說明自己的困難)

Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for some help.Would you like to...so that...？ (請求一)In the meanwhile， I beg you to...(請求二)Also， I would like you to...(請求三)I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and...(表示感激)

Looking forward to your reply.(表達(dá)期望)

Yours truly，

Li Hua

類文跟進(jìn)

假定你是李華，你校12月24日晚將舉行“英語文化節(jié)”戲?。╠rama）比賽，你們班級正在緊張地排練節(jié)目《百萬英鎊》(The Million Pound Bank Note)，準(zhǔn)備參賽，你給高一曾教過你的外教Mr Smith寫一封電子郵件尋求指導(dǎo)。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.你附上了節(jié)目排練錄像，請他給予你相關(guān)的指導(dǎo)；

2.邀請他圣誕節(jié)前夜晚上7:00～9:00到學(xué)校報告廳觀看比賽。注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：戲劇drama 排練rehearsal

Dear Mr Smith,

Yours，

Li Hua

【參考范文】

Dear Mr Smith，

I am Li Hua，who you taught in Senior One.I still remember the wonderful classes you gave us.Now I am writing for some advice.

Our school is having a drama competition on Dec.24 as part of an English Culture Festival，and we have been working hard on our performance of The Million Pound Bank Note.I have sent a video of our rehearsal.Could you please tell us what you think of our performance?Is there anything we can do to improve it?

Any suggestions are highly appreciated.And we sincerely invite you to watch our competition live at the School Lecture Hall from 7 to 9 on the evening of Dec.24.

Looking forward to your coming.

Yours，

Li Hua