A Visit to Qingdao

I went on a visit to Qingdao with my parents this summer.It is a beautiful city with so many places to visit.But what impressed me most was Laoshan Mountain.

I got up early that morning.It took us about an hour to get there by bus.Then we started to climb the mountain.There were trees and strange stones everywhere.The clean spring water few along the mountain.I took some spring water and tasted it.It was fresh and a bit sweet.We enjoyed the beautiful scenery while walking leisurely.Two hours later, we were on the top of the mountain.

It was a memorable experience.

江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學(xué) 八年（2）班 王夢蕊

陳傳光老師點評：

這是一篇關(guān)于旅游的記敘文。作者選取了自己印象最深的一個景點進行描述。文章按照登山的順序，著重描寫了登山的過程，表達(dá)了自己對嶗山的喜愛和當(dāng)時愉快的心情。全文文字流暢、用詞得當(dāng)，是一篇不錯的學(xué)生習(xí)作。

教師簡介

陳傳光，35歲，中學(xué)英語一級教師，于江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學(xué)任教，從事教育教學(xué)工作13年。陳傳光老師是江蘇省教育學(xué)會會員、連云港市優(yōu)秀教育園丁及連云港市教學(xué)工作先進個人，獲得過英語專業(yè)技能大賽市一等獎。其亦在各核心和主流期刊上發(fā)表過多篇論文。