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Safety is very important to everyone， especially teenagers. As students， we should learn to keep ourselves safe all the time. What should we do？ Here are some advices.

First， we should keep safe at home. If we stay at home alone， we shouldnt open the door for the strangers， and we mustnt play fire at home， because its very dangerous. Second， when we are in the school， we must obey school rules. When we go downstairs， we must walk in line slowly， and when we found someone push us from back， we must stop at once. Third， when we are in the public places， we should also pay attention to the people around us. Wed better not go to the places where there are too many people or go out alone at night. When we are in danger， we must call police at once. Besides， we should keep safe on the road， follow the traffic rules， you will be safe all the time.

In a word， keeping safe is very important， we should know how to protect ourselves .And be safe， be happy！

【簡評】青少年的安全問題是當(dāng)今社會廣泛關(guān)注的一個(gè)話題。這篇作文，小作者能從多方面進(jìn)行分析表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，可以看得出每一個(gè)選材都是經(jīng)過思考的，中心思想把握很準(zhǔn)確。但在詞匯的選擇和應(yīng)用上略顯單一，可不斷積累和拓展，注重一些典型詞匯的運(yùn)用，使表達(dá)更加完善。

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