陳婉欣
Hi Tom,
Thanks for your last e-mail. Now let me tell you how I get to school,too. Well,my home is not far from the school. Its two kilometers. I usually leave my home at a quarter to seven and walk to the bus stop. Then I take the bus to the school. Sometimes it takes me about ten minutes to get there by bus. The bus ride is never boring,because I always talk to my friends. Its good exercise.
Im glad to be your friends.
Amy
簡評:每個(gè)人都有朋友。初中學(xué)生由于生活圈子的狹小,談?wù)摰脑掝}也很有限。在這篇習(xí)作中,小作者和筆友聊天的范圍集中在上學(xué)的方式、花費(fèi)的時(shí)間以及學(xué)校和家之間距離的描述,這是本單元的3個(gè)重點(diǎn)句型——How,How far, How long提問的句型。最后,小作者還用形象的語言告訴我們她在乘車時(shí)的感受,鍛煉了運(yùn)用語言交際的能力。
(指導(dǎo)教師:那莎)
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